My essay: An Examination of Societal Structure and Sexism Through Mr. Collins

I am pretty happy with my essay.  I definitely worked as hard as I could, and thought my ideas were original.  My strong sentence structure and vocabulary reflect the amount of time that I devoted to the paper.  Not only that, but my thesis sets a strong foundation for the entire paper.  On the other hand, I drifted off-topic at times.  At the same time, while my essay may have gone a little off-topic, I believe that it still had a very good flow.  Without a doubt, this was the strongest essay I have written in my opinion.