Hamlet Esse Comments

This essay reflects my growth as a writer.  In my previous essay, I had a fairly general focus; however, in this essay, I had a very clear and narrow focus.  In doing so, I was able to write a better essay.  While I spent less time on this one, I spent a lot of time thinking out my ideas which helped me save time and provide a solid structure to my essay.  I look forward to mastering the techniques of devising a college level essay over the year, as I am starting to grasp how to properly write one.